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Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should: 还应将英文的提纲看清楚。这篇文章配了双图,双图多是表示对比关系,这里是凸显时间 的先后。提纲包括三个部分:描写图画、阐释含义和指出后果,这就决定了我们文章的结 构走向。 In the first one, a large crowd gathered around a man lying on the ground. One person said, “He seems to be drunk.” Another whispered, “His head and hands seem to be bleeding.” In the second picture, a policeman is asking those who were present, “Why didn't send him to hospital?” The first one said, “I was hurrying to work.” The second one said, “I was hurrying to school.” unfavorable social phenomenon. Many people are used to finding all kinds of excuses to shirk their responsibilities of helping those who are in need of help. In their eyes, their own daily businesses are always more important than those of the strangers, even their lives. people refuse to take care of the strangers, the danger of accidents will be much higher, because you have only a small group of people to rely on whenever emergency arises. Everyone may come across accidents from time to time, and mutual help will prevent most of them from being destructive. Second, the possibility of attaining a happy life will be much smaller. If everyone only takes his own interests into consideration in face of big events, the society will be full of selfish people. The social cost of achieving success will remain high before cooperation becomes a habit. prepared to extend our helping hands to others including strangers, for helping others is equal to helping ourselves. 注意这一段不宜过长。 直指图画所揭示的社会现象,后面两句来具体说明:先说许多人千方百计找理由以逃避 帮助他人;然后解释原因,他们认为……注意段中句子之间的逻辑关系,这是非常重要 的。 第一点说明当人们不愿意帮助他人时,事故所造成的危险就会大得多,因为那样的话每 个人能依靠的人(即亲人和朋友)是非常有限的。这一点的第二句话是个难句,展现了 很强的句子内部的逻辑,希望大家用心学习。这句话的意思是:每个人都会遇到事故, 而相互帮助可以避免大部分的事故造成毁灭性的后果。到这里,我们可以看出,思想是 由语言表达的,要想深刻地表达思想,一定要多模仿、多操练。第二点是从更广阔的角 度去考虑问题,说明获得幸福生活的可能性减小了。社会充满了自私的人们,获得成功 的社会成本陡增。 emergency表示“紧急情况”。第三句的destructive表示“造成重大损害的”。第五 句的in face of表示“面临”。最后一句的cooperation becomes a habit表示“合作 成为一种习惯”。 |
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