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Study the following table carefully and write an essay in which you should: 指标名称 1989 1997 2002 有机地结合起来,确定文章的最终布局。这道题还是属于图表题中的表格题,比较 特殊。表格中共有三个变量,应该看出来有一个变量,即人均卫生总费用支出是大 幅增长的,而另两个变量,即每万人口医院床位数和每万人口医生数,是基本未变 的。第一段的工作就是描述这两个趋势。第二段中阐释这一趋势,就是要重点突出 这一对比。第三段做出评论,对于一种不能令人满意的现状甚至令人担忧的社会问 题,大多数时候最好的选择就是写改进或解决问题的办法了。 rose from 76.5 yuan in 1989 to 186.4 yuan in 1997 and then to 442.5 yuan in 2002. In the same period, the number of hospital beds every 10,000 people and the number of doctors every 10,000 people stayed at almost the same level. expenses and the unsatisfactory hospital facilities. On the one hand, the money spent on medical care has climbed sharply in the past decade. According to the National Bureau of Statistics, the medical expense has soared to 7.3 percent of the total expenses of urban residents, and 6.0 of that of rural residents in 2003. On the other hand, the limited scale of hospitals cannot meet the needs of our people. It is true that we have more advanced medical instruments, but the numbers of beds and doctors have changed little over the last decade. We all know that timely medical operation is extremely important in many cases, but how can we ensure it without finding a bed first? place, we have to standardize medicalpractices, regulate the drug circulation and perfect the medical care system to bring down the medical expenses. In the second place, we should build more firstclass hospitals, expand the scale of present hospitals and turn out more medical talents. If all of these canbe accomplished our people will surely receive better medical care and live a happier life. clearly that开始,描写了人均卫生总费用支出逐年攀升的事实。而第二句以In the same period强势开头,描述了其它两个变量基本不变(stay at almost the same level)的情形,概括性很强。 是高涨(soar)的医疗费用,另一方面是不能令人满意的医院设施,而后分两方面来 说。第一方面分两句话,先说医疗费用剧烈攀升。而后举出国家统计局的数字,是医 疗费用占城市和农村居民支出的百分比,很有说服力。如果我们没有确凿的数据,就 不要这样写,切忌胡编乱造。另一方面的描述共分三句话,先说医院有限的规模无法 满足人民的需求。第二句相当于although引导的让步状语从句,但是语气更强一些 ——我们虽然医疗器械有所改进,但床位数和医生数无甚改观。最后一句话说我们都 知道及时的手术很重要,可如果连床位都没有怎能保证手术呢? 面是说采取措施(规范医疗操作、调控药品流通和优化医疗保健体系)来降低医疗费 用。第二方面是说通过建立更多的一流医院、扩充现有医院的规模和培养更多的医学 人才来解决当前的矛盾。最后一句是结语——如果所有这些都能实现,我们的人民一 定能接受更好的医疗保健,过上更幸福的生活。 |
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