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Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should: 有多种可能性。我们可以采用一种比较独特的方式,先描述图表,在第二段中就所表达 的内容进行提问,在第三段中以举例说明我们对该问题的理解和认识,最后在第四段做 结。 city. We can imagine the loss of lives and property. Under the picture, there was a thoughtprovoking sentence: every drop of water says it is not responsible for the flood.This picture inevitably invites a series of questions: then who is responsible forthe flood? Who has demolished the houses? Who has drowned the children? so cleanthe water was drinkable and so many people went swimming and fishing. Only two decades later, many of them became so polluted that we can no longer drink the waterfishes have died out and nobody ever swims in it or washes clothes by it. Every one of us never thinks the industrial waste or the living garbage we once damped into the river would cause so serious a resulttoday the harsh reality has become too hard to swallow. the flood. Only if every citizen takes on his responsibility as a member of a family, a nation and the world can all of us wish to have a more beautiful future. picture unfolds before our eyes以深化看到图画后受到的震撼。而后加 入了联想性的句子We can imagine the loss of lives and property,这是 不多见的。然后描述了图下的一句话。 做了充分的铺垫。三个问题中,第一个问题直接与上段末句形成对立,而后面 两句则是呼应首段的次句,可谓环环相扣,联系紧密。 了鲜明的对比——二十年前的河流清澈,二十年后的却污染严重。最后一句是 关键——倾倒工业废料、生活垃圾的人也没有想到会有如此严重的后果。 得到的结论。第二句话引申说——每个公民都要尽自己的责任,我们才能拥有 美好的明天。 |
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