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Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should: 审题: 结构非常清晰,分为三个部分——描述图画,说明危害,提出解决办法。我们可 按照提纲来构建我们的文章,将文章分成三段来写。 Different are the things they are doing on computerssome are playing gamesand some are chatting online; but the same are the expressions they wear before the computersattentive and addicted. It seemsthat they are so absorbed in the unreal world that they may not notice anything around them in the real world. harm to children. First of all, it will affect their study by taking up a lot of time and energy. Secondly, radiation from computers will harm their health, especially their eyes. In addition, their indulging in the unreal world will have negative influence on their communication with people in the real world, and thus will hamper the development of their personality and mental health. responsibility falls on parents, who are supposed to have more significant influence on the growth of children. By improving mutual communication, they can establish a better relationship with the children, make them feel they are cared and understood, and reasonably direct their interests. Next come teachers and schools, who, undoubtedly, play an important role in children's education. Besides teaching knowledge in class, they should help children develop various interests to fill their afterclass time, such as sports and scientific invention. In my belief, the problem of children's addiction in net games and chat can be solved through efficient communication and proper guidance. 比法,说不同的是有的打游戏,有的上网聊天,可相同的是都那样专注。第三句采用 结果状语从句,充分描述了他们此时的状态。 害健康;第三点是对个人成长极为不利。 面两点(共四句话)的总结。 |
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